Excellent. Very fun and entertaining film that could be enjoyed by a wide age range. Biggest drawback is that there is some profanity. Also has some violence but it is essential to the story as the good guys defend themselves. Story is interesting and has a good beginning, middle and end that are plausible. The characters are well defined which makes you immediately care about what happens to them. The back-story is also well told so you understand the legends and the history as well as the prophecy and how it connects with immediate events. At times the story is a bit confusing but it may be clarified when produced as a film. Action is steady, not too intense or too slow. The characters are one of the greatest strengths of this screenplay. The dialogue is very believable with relaxed and true communication. It's very age-appropriate with the girls using slang that most likely won't outdate it. The weakest part is the grammar and spelling errors of the screenplay itself. It needs copy-editing.
A computer microchip sends three ordinary teenagers from New York City into Tech World, a living world inside our computers, where they must destroy an evil computer virus that threatens to wipe out the one thing they love, technology.
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